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Dan
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Post subject: Re: Grab a seat......Have an ale. Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 2:56 am |
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We need traffic. ![Thinking [face_thinking]](./images/smilies/ymthinking.gif)
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Samuel Walters
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Post subject: Re: Grab a seat......Have an ale. Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 12:57 am |
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Might I suggest a few redheaded elvish barmaids? Scantily clad? Too obvious? ![Whistle [face_whistling]](./images/smilies/ymwhistle.gif)
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Dan
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Post subject: Re: Grab a seat......Have an ale. Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 2:37 am |
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Scantily...clad...barmaids? ![Drool [face_drooling]](./images/smilies/ymdrool.gif) er I mean What does this place look like, the Dragon Tamer?! Hmm... 
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Samuel Walters
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Post subject: Re: Grab a seat......Have an ale. Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 5:06 pm |
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Dan
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Post subject: Re: Grab a seat......Have an ale. Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 9:42 am |
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Less than ten chapters of editing and the 4th edition will be ready for formatting/compiling/typesetting. Getting there, man... getting there. 
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Dan
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Post subject: Re: Grab a seat......Have an ale. Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:32 pm |
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I'm starting the Battle of Destriel now, if that tells you anything. 
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Samuel Walters
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Post subject: Re: Grab a seat......Have an ale. Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 7:46 pm |
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Dan
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Post subject: Re: Grab a seat......Have an ale. Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 8:04 pm |
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Reading Creepers and Dust... that world is somewhat reminiscent of Stephen King's Gunslinger world. Desolate, yet rich.
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Samuel Walters
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Post subject: Re: Grab a seat......Have an ale. Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 12:54 pm |
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Yeah, it's definitely supposed to have that post-apocalyptic "The world has moved on" kind of vibe. It's still part of the larger Andira world, but I wanted to show a place that wasn't as idyllic as the setting for the main storyline.
One of the things I've been doing is writing a bunch of short stories, character sketches and so forth as a means of building and exploring the overall story world. So this was my way of trying to figure out what life might be like in other places of Andira.
Thanks for reading it!
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Post subject: Re: Grab a seat......Have an ale. Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 1:18 pm |
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I enjoyed it. I like your writing style, it's very crisp, very lucid... You do have a knack for conveying imagery with words. Which is what it's all about, really.  I'm going to have to dig into the rest of your works. There's a lot for me to catch up on. ![Cool [face_cool]](./images/smilies/ymcool.gif)
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Samuel Walters
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Post subject: Re: Grab a seat......Have an ale. Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 8:10 pm |
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Thanks! I sometimes wonder if my writing is a bit too sparse. It's hard to break the poetry-writing mindset I've had and break into full blown prose. But I guess that's where the imagery comes from. I hope you enjoy the rest ... though, admittedly, some of it is a bit rambling ... more like stream-of-consciousness type stuff.
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Post subject: Re: Grab a seat......Have an ale. Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 8:46 pm |
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Stream of consciousness works well enough in getting it out there. It's great for world building and backstory type stuff as well. When writing early drafts of anything, to really get it done you gotta write like you just don't care... at least that's how it worked for me. But later on, you gotta edit like every comma matters, like every typo is poison.  (I am so looking forward to when rev. 4 is finally out and I can market the hell out of it without being embarrassed by all the glaring weaknesses in the older versions)
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Samuel Walters
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Post subject: Re: Grab a seat......Have an ale. Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:08 pm |
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Dan
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Post subject: Re: Grab a seat......Have an ale. Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 3:36 am |
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Holy crap, a post that isn't trying to sell pills!
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